animation1 5 comp from Olivia Newsome on Vimeo.

Here is my progress so far, I think that I need to add in some sort of intro to the animation before the cello starts playing and after the zoom into the paper. This would direct the audience into the animation with a clear understanding on what its about or what its based on.

I feel i also need to figure out a good way of changing the transition from 0:15-0:17 seconds as it doesn't give the smooth transitional/metamorphosis effect that I am trying to achieve.

Little things like this is what stops my animation from looking professional and its what keeps it looking 'ok' and not 'good'.