I got a lot of feedback that I will definitely take into account and work to. The improvements given have been really helpful of what specific things that I should do to help my module.
General feedback:
- Wonderful colour palette, seems very refined and well selected.
- Love it, consistent.
- Really interesting idea.
- Really cool idea and nice palette. Also really useful, are you producing books?
- Really well crafted images.
- Great uniformity across the pages.
- Really well drawn scenes- you nailed the perspective.
- Nice resolutions, crisp yet wispy and gestural. Good balance.
Peer review feedback:
Demonstrate an informed understanding of issues relating to media, communication, audience and context through the delivery of solutions to brief led problems or clearly identified creative concerns. (Knowledge &Understanding - Critical Awareness)
Strengths
- Evidence of contextual research
- Good body of work both in quality and size
Improvements
- Needs some more annotation on research findings
-Additional blog posts needed on development stages.
Understand the potential and limitations of technologies and processes used in the production of illustration for 2d,3d and/or 4d distribution. (Knowledge and Understanding - Research)
Strengths
- considered layout of book, evidenced how it would work on a spread
- evidence of how it would look on products such as a bottle packaging in early development
Improvements
- document evidence of researching the technologies involved in book binding and printing
Analyse and critically evaluate the impact of social, cultural, technological and/or ethical concerns on the development of solutions to problems relevant to individual creative concerns.
(Cognitive Skills - Problem Analysis, Problem Solving)
Strengths
- considered audience and why illustration are appropriate in book format
Improvements
- target audience down to who exactly it is in the individual blog post.
- consider environmental impact
- consider a mock ebook
Explore and apply a range of appropriate practical and conceptual approaches to self-determined ideas, concepts, solutions/proposals in response to own identified intentions and relevant practices. (Practical Skills - Practical and Conceptual Development)
Strengths
- considered different styles and formats (bottle to book)
Improvements
- Document how text/type developed
Produce technically competent and conceptually appropriate outcomes to identified problems through the selection and application of visual skills. (Practical Skills - Visual Quality and Technical Competence)
Strengths
- thought gone into colour, style and format
Improvements
- perhaps show experimentation with different paper stocks to see which works best
- consider handwritten cover
Demonstrate the ability to plan and carry out a period of increasingly self-directed study through the appropriate use of workshop areas, studio activity and project management skills.
(key transferable Skills - Presentation and Evaluation)
Strengths
- well time tabled
- boards clear and easy to read
Improvements
- catch u with blogging
General Comments
- more research on the manufacture of books to the level of research of bottled ginger beer
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