Feedback from peer review:
Knowledge & Understanding: Research
- More contextual research
-PDF articles on blog so its easier to go through
-Break things down
Cognitive Skills: Problem Analysis
- Explored visuals routes can take
-More development about process e.g sketchbook work
Practical and Professional Skills: Visual Quality
- Your strongest work is when you use shape and a simple texture
- Can see that you are starting to capitalise on it.
- Presentation just needs to be a little more detailed, e.g constant size etc
Practical and Professional Skills: Technical Competence
- Explored colour and shape really well
- Clear tone of voice
- Would be nice to see some final outcomes printed professionally
- Print articles in context
- Put images in ISSUU
Key Transferable Skills: Evaluation
- Write about each image break down the evaluation to make it more coherent
- Continue to self evaluate
- Explain how you got to that point
I agree with most of the feedback given, it has been really helpful to be shown these areas that I need to work on and improve as I have found it difficult to see these 'gaps' myself. I will definitely take on the feedback and change things accordingly.
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