I have come up with some pieces to show in the crit. The feedback that was given was that my book is too much like Owen Davey's- I had a feeling this might happen! Fred advised me to take my practice back to basics and steer away from the graphic shapes. I completely agree with what he has said. I have done what I tend do and have come up with an idea way too quickly. I have also designed a book which is something that I tend to do as well. I think that it is best to rethink my whole idea and strip it back so that it is just about the rainforest then build from there.
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