Below is an animated GIF showing my progress through my 3 chosen ideas from initial drawing to the finished outcome.
Peer feedback:
Strengths:
- Lots of brilliantly though ideas developed to the end
- Clear consideration of concept and finding of ideas that work well
- Good experimentation of colour
- The 3 pieces work well together as a series while maintaining such different ideas in each frame
- Lots of fine ideas all expanding from different points of the article
- Simplistic in appearance-easily conveying message
- Interesting development from pencil, to coloured pencil to digital.
- Use of digital media works really well on this piece giving it a bold, clear appearance
- Nice use of different compositions
Suggestions:
- Composition within sketches
- Produce even more ideas to improve
- Make sure the objects are in proportion (e.g. the ladder is too small)
- There could of been more concepts for each idea; different figures, backgrounds, compositions etc.
- Keep practicing with different digital brushes although they already really display a good mix of brushes
- Form of figures could be improved after further practice of anatomy
Below is my written evaluation of my work.
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