Action plan:
-Research rainforest animals and plants more.
-Think bigger- look into large scale work. - in particular large vinyl stickers
-Think about infographics.- research 'graphic thought facility'
-Look into the retail side of museums.
-It could be good to visit the national history museum
-Visit tropical world
Strengths:
"Great initial ideas produced. I particularly like the potential screen print ideas of the leaves. Strong scope and scale of the work. Varied Visual imagery, detailed pieces with time clearly invested in them. I like the idea for the book."
"Good topic with all scope needed for big kahuna. Good to be open minded up until now. Wonderful use of sketchbook. It is informing your work well. Strong body of work developing. Extra detail in drawings is working well for you- all very positive. Brilliant exploration of creatures on photoshop, the gecko is fantastic, keep developing black and white drawings with bursts of colour and texture. Response is on its way to achieving the problem"
Suggestions:
"Varied visual language evidences so far, but have you settled on a specific style to follow on with? Now seems like a good time to do so. Could you propose a huge wall of different rainforest layers and the animals that live within the layers. Perhaps discuss more on your blog about your intended audience"
"Some really lovely use of on your work, you could scan this in and use as textures. Key drawing and finding textures to use are you are excellent with textures. This will help artwork always improve and be informed."
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