The general feedback that I got from the group was that my proposal was 'lovely'. They said that it was a really interesting idea and felt that I had considered it really well. A strength of mine was that I had considered lots of different ways of presenting the work regarding the format.
The places that they thought needed further clarification was that I needed to make sure that I chose 1 thing to focus on in terms of the workload that would be produced if i chose to definitely make a printed product as well as the concertina book. Something else that I was told was to make sure I research the different jobs well so that I can show them in the best representation possible. Also I need to make sure that I consider the paper and colour; my peers really liked the screen printed gradient and said it was definitely something to consider.
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